Rain..

Two words: absolutely perfect. This is very life-like, and it is so chilling. You must have spent at least a month or so on this one work alone!

When I look at this picture, I see myself in a big city on top of a skyscraper with my hands in the air as I wait for God to take me to his kingdom on a dark and stormy night. This is totally top-notch and very impressive, man! Excellent technique, excellent vision, excellent originality, excellent impact, excellent everything.

My advice to you is this: don't change a thing. With that in mind, focus on what is important in life: the picture. Always keep an eye out for stuff, and don't give up! You've totally got it in you. I can feel it.